Can someone please help me with grammar and sound more professional?

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When I said hello, they seemed pretty confused. One of them gave me this weird looking drink, and as the good person I am, I accepted it and drank it. The next thing I know, I'm on a color changing dance floor.

I was busting moves I didn't know I even had. Later, this strange alien invited me to see through the window of the main deck. I saw uranus, and it wasn't pretty. I also saw the impressive sight of planet earth.

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